| = !!! | Marius Surleac [06.Jul.08 11:03] |
| Try to fix the grammar problems within the text. Thank you! | |
| = higher... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [06.Jul.08 19:18] |
| nice, but still below poetry... | |
| = Utterly unneccesary... | John Willy Kopperud [16.Aug.08 17:21] |
| ...is your seventh line - and love so much this people - and besides it hardly makes sense. Secondly - and I guess that's just misspelt - it's CHILDREN you want to write. Lastly I would prefer : I wish YOU'LL live in freedom and peace. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Thank you! | danut gradinaru [16.Aug.08 21:41] |
| Thank you Willy! | |
| = I do think I may approve this one... | John Willy Kopperud [16.Aug.08 19:16] |
| ...if you drop the following: "is your seventh line and love so much this people. I have a vague clue to where you're aiming, but it's not proper English. Please try again! Best wishes from Willy | |
| = I do think I may approve this one... | John Willy Kopperud [16.Aug.08 19:31] |
| ...if you drop the following: "is your seventh line and love so much this people. I have a vague clue to where you're aiming, but it's not proper English. Please try again! Best wishes from Willy | |
| = And there... | John Willy Kopperud [17.Aug.08 16:48] |
| ...you arrived at the finishing line! Thank you for following advice. Chers from Willy | |
| = Thanks for the help! | danut gradinaru [17.Aug.08 17:31] |
| Thank you dear Willi for the help! | |