| = like we're used... | Marius Surleac [02.Aug.08 08:16] |
| I like your stories about Gepetto and Pinocchio, have something different and the story keeps you hanged till the end. Though, it’s better to use “ghosts and fears not owned” instead of “not his own”. Cheers, Marius | |
| = Thank you.... | Cleo Sandoi [05.Aug.08 11:20] |
| ...for always reading my work and giving me feedback but this time I think that using "not his own" instead of "not owned" gives the text a certain effect. It is a phrase you will meet often in my writings because it has a lot to do with my themes and with me. | |