| = well done! | Marius Surleac [08.Aug.08 23:28] |
| Again, great rhythm and rhyme. Interesting though and a little bit funny! Well done! Cheers, Marius | |
| = Thank you | Lisnic Anna [09.Aug.08 09:15] |
| I am glad that you like my poems. I hope I will not disappoint my readers in the future | |
| = An instance of Love's Great (Im)possibilities | Simona Sumanaru [10.Aug.08 10:33] |
| ...is captured here. You've got me wondering again when/why love has become a battlefield. Suggestions: "We go to sleep alone at night/But still we share the same old dream", also "Then take a shower, have some tea". You want to sound harsh, but you can't hide that sweet womanly sensitivity. Some advice: When you go with the rhyming flow, try not to leave English behind ;-) | |