| = Sweet... | John Willy Kopperud [09.Aug.08 16:46] |
| ...conventional, but no too bad. I think you have the capacity to write more engaging texts if you stray away from tales of unhappy love. Cheers from Willy | |
| = my opinion | Marius Surleac [09.Aug.08 18:32] |
| The idea is ok but the poem will look better if you'll get rid of the annoying repetition. | |
| = Thank you | Teodoru Cora-Eliana [09.Aug.08 19:30] |
| for your commments! | |