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Marius Surleac
[25.Sep.08 22:27]
Not always the rhyme means everything - here is quite forced and doesn't flow. Also, the repetition of "may you" kills the beautiful parts of the poem, it burdens it.
= Because of poetry...
Andreea Maresi
[14.Jun.10 18:37]
I really like this kind of poetry...I remembered of a special sensible person reading it. I let experts criticize.
Keep it up!
By the way, also for me it seems interesting to finish the poetry with the title.

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= !!!	Marius Surleac [25.Sep.08 22:27]
Not always the rhyme means everything - here is quite forced and doesn't flow. Also, the repetition of "may you" kills the beautiful parts of the poem, it burdens it.

= Because of poetry...	Andreea Maresi [14.Jun.10 18:37]
I really like this kind of poetry...I remembered of a special sensible person reading it. I let experts criticize. Keep it up! By the way, also for me it seems interesting to finish the poetry with the title.