| = . | dan marius [08.Oct.08 16:38] |
| "he broke the holy song into a thousand pieces and they called for his lips to be burned". outstanding lines, would make outstanding lyrics. an honor to read you, mrs. do come back | |
| = A heartfelt | Simona Sumanaru [10.Oct.08 17:54] |
| Thank You! True, been gone for a short while, had to see about the world; yet I'm here now. I may be a rock, but I ain't no island. ;-) | |
| + may sunday | dan marius [12.May.09 18:36] |
| since I thought this poem deserved a star but at the time I couldn't quite give it, I'll give it now. as I said before I loved this : "he broke the holy song into a thousand pieces and they called for his lips to be burned". I'm really bad at interpreting poems so I'll just say what I feel. I feel that perhaps sometimes the most rusty bell needs to be heard. How else could we see the yellow flowers floating over people's heads? Wonderful poem. | |
| = what it makes you feel | Simona Sumanaru [15.May.09 12:10] |
| is the best way to interpret a poem in my opinion, and you did wonderfully. Thank you! "Those who are the hardest to love, need it the most", says Socrates... the rusty bells. In order to win Heaven, one has to fight Hell. Thanks again, Dan! | |