= welcome new member! | Marius Surleac [27.Sep.08 12:04] |
Interesting playground! Though I have to mention few mistakes: Can you tell me what „lyricless” means – maybe you mean “lyrics”, also there should be “instruments” instead of “instrumets”, maybe is “bat guanos” instead of “bat guans” because “guan” is a bird not the excrement called “guano”; “horizontal” instead of “horisontal”; “playground” instead of “playgound”; “unmoved” instead of “unmowed”; “had forgotten” instead of “had forgot”, or just simple “forgot” without “had” in front. Marius | |
= Thanks! | Daniela Hendea [27.Sep.08 22:47] |
Thank you so much for reading my lines and for the welcome. I'm going to correct the mistakes! | |