= in a knot! | Marius Surleac [02.Oct.08 17:01] |
I like these high expectations, feelings, strongly connected to the Latin saw, a bit of anger. Well done Andrada! One minor error though: there is "caress" instead of "carress". Cheers, Marius | |
= oops | Andrada Ianosi [02.Oct.08 18:28] |
Thank you for pointing it out. Typing error, but thanks to you I fixed it. I'm really glad you liked the text. Unfortunately, we all enter life filled with immense expectations, but what we find is nothing more than illusions. Once again : Vanitas vanitatum omnia vanitas. | |
= I enjoyed reading this too | Mike Aspros [03.Oct.08 07:52] |
Mercurial words, beautiful opening, symbolizing the chaotic dialogue from within we have with each other. Thank you for sharing this, best -mike | |