| = eyes on the horizon! | Corina Gina Papouis [03.Oct.08 21:02] |
| Returning to values, the core of who we really are/ want to be. Where there is growth there is grief..Survival is the only way forward. Regards! | |
| = corina. | Christopher Thripp [03.Oct.08 21:13] |
| absolutley...thank you. | |
| = The wind, the rain, the growth | John Willy Kopperud [03.Oct.08 22:15] |
| Good and simple math, Chris. A poem that starts slightly on the dark side and ends in a positive statement. Nice! Cheers from Willy | |
| = willy. | Christopher Thripp [04.Oct.08 00:26] |
| thank you willy appreciated. | |
| = wonderful | Lynn West [04.Oct.08 02:24] |
| I love this one - you know my friend when we "learn" from our life experiences... well, that's what poetry is, right? Well done! | |
| = lynn | Christopher Thripp [04.Oct.08 02:30] |
| thank you lynn much appreciated... | |
| + growth | Marius Surleac [04.Oct.08 15:07] |
| A life experience, pointed out using a smart shape within the body of words. A bit of anger, high intensity of the feelings, wise; all these in strong contact with the nature that surrounds us and keeps us alive. The last stanza is brilliant! Well done min freond! Marius | |
| = marius. | Christopher Thripp [04.Oct.08 17:46] |
| thank you marius for your appreciation i think we all agree writing about life experience is something we all can relate too... thank you for the twinkler... | |
| = thank you | Mike Aspros [05.Oct.08 05:56] |
| for posting this, its simple words have such depth in meaning. I'm writing this poem down in my journal to sit with me, thank you -best mike | |
| = mike. | Christopher Thripp [05.Oct.08 06:25] |
| thank you mike for reading my work... as always i appreciate your words... | |
| = i like it | Dora Road [14.Oct.08 17:19] |
| though today's society lives in keen demystification the wise can keep the values real- even if just for themselves | |
| = dora | Christopher Thripp [15.Oct.08 18:22] |
| thank you dora much appreciated... | |