| = split frequence|
|even if a little off the clock, my comment is that this poem is marvellous!|
I'm glad to find you here- you know, being a constant reader of the site www.citesti.opoeziepezi.com - your poems and style are very familiar to me.
a little suggestion- try to change "decided" with "determined"
all my best,
| = decided|
|Veronica, decided is better. Thank you.|
| = +|
|"determined" is better, sorry:)|