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 =  split frequence
Veronica Valeanu
[04.Feb.09 20:28]
even if a little off the clock, my comment is that this poem is marvellous!
I'm glad to find you here- you know, being a constant reader of the site www.citesti.opoeziepezi.com - your poems and style are very familiar to me.

a little suggestion- try to change "decided" with "determined"
all my best,
\Veronica

 =  decided
Snowdon King
[13.Feb.09 15:05]
Veronica, decided is better. Thank you.

 =  +
Snowdon King
[13.Feb.09 15:06]
"determined" is better, sorry:)




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