| = welcome new member! | Marius Surleac [15.Dec.08 10:57] |
| Interesting idea of your poem shape, but the punctuation is a bit annoying - if you'll take it out will be better. Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Question | Isabela Adela Rózsás [15.Dec.08 12:21] |
| Dear Marius, What do you mean by taking it out? The punctuation, or the poem? Punctuation belongs to that special feeling which made the words to live into a poem; into this poem. I think, that is up to the writer and that it belongs to the freedom of art. I am looking forward for you kind suggestions? Have a perfect day! Sincerely, Isbaela | |