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= congrats
dan marius
[24.Mar.09 08:54]
inspired imagery. brilliant poem. I liked it a lot. Best part "At long last you whitewashed white elephants on my kissing lips."

= dan
Veronica Valeanu
[24.Mar.09 10:04]
saying you like it gives me a good vibe.
nevertheless, i feel smth is missing here in the interior, that it is still unfinished, but i can't exactly put my finger on it.
thank you for your visit & indulging comment.
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Veronica Valeanu
[24.Mar.09 10:05]
*indulgent
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dan marius
[24.Mar.09 10:30]
it's just perfect the way it is. do not touch it :)

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= congrats	dan marius [24.Mar.09 08:54]
inspired imagery. brilliant poem. I liked it a lot. Best part "At long last you whitewashed white elephants on my kissing lips."

= dan	Veronica Valeanu [24.Mar.09 10:04]
saying you like it gives me a good vibe. nevertheless, i feel smth is missing here in the interior, that it is still unfinished, but i can't exactly put my finger on it. thank you for your visit & indulging comment.

= *.	Veronica Valeanu [24.Mar.09 10:05]
*indulgent

= veronica	dan marius [24.Mar.09 10:30]
it's just perfect the way it is. do not touch it :)