| = hippie | Alina Tacu [17.Jan.07 19:21] |
| Hello, Chalif, Do you know they eat cheese melted in honey? There is a lot o cosmopolitism in what you are trying to say here, but I like it. It is like a flight over the "impossible dream". "it was as if I was reading in the bathroom" And this is a terribly hippie image. Go, go, maybe you will meet the Wandering Jew, Gog, Count of Saint Germaine or whoever you'd like to talk to. Sincerely (I do hate this extremely formal stuff!) Alina | |
| = nevermind | felix nicolau [17.Jan.07 19:23] |
| official stuff , alina! your comm is just surprinsing by highlighting the exotism. interesting approach - with hippie-like nonchalance | |
| = as if | Anni- Lorei Mainka [23.Jan.07 01:42] |
| this poem-picture is in its profound contextuality not cosmopolitan, its a snap in a high-stiled form, a snap-shot of a life as we have it in Netherlands 18 century....the bridge from Romanian to English is narrow, isn t it, Felix? | |
| = pace, rhythm & poetry | Edilberto González Trejos [23.Jan.07 01:42] |
| Suggestive, rhythmical and somehow mysterious! Loved the pace. Well-achieved translation. Poetry was purely kept! Yours, Songo | |