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motzoaca
[09.Jan.03 22:40]
cred ca daca ai face mici modificari , ar iesi o poezie buna.de exemplu:
"de caldura, de tine, se rastoarna si-si omoara por dupa por" ,acel "si-si" nu suna prea bine, ca si "por dupa por".mi-a placut flacara din ce in ce mai mica, trupul- fluturul tau geaman de lut.
 =  frumusete
Vamesu
[09.Jan.03 23:56]
frumos, frumoaso!
 =  ce imi place
mae
[12.Jan.03 01:03]
imi place penultima strofa



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