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 =  universul anabellei
Hazel
[24.Mar.03 19:18]
Simplu curge textul tau, si, oarecum, se rotunjeste spre final. Totusi, nu l-as incadra la "poezie", chiar daca are versuri care, culmea, mai si rimeaza :).
Ar merge mai bine la "ganduri" sau la "personal". Ce zici?

 =  Domoale rotocoale-n vant
lapislazuli
[24.Mar.03 20:54]
Mie mi-a placut. Mic univers...

 =  Hazel
Anabelle
[26.Mar.03 21:32]
E intr-adevar foarte personal...Dar pt ca mi-au venit in minte idei care 'rimau' mi s-a parut mai potrivit poezie:)




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