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Anca Veronica Anghel
[09.Nov.03 17:43]
Please try to write shorter sentences. The phrases that you wrote are much too long sometimes. I know that in Romanian language we can use long phrases, but in English it is a little bit different (especially when you do translation).

Thank you.
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Axel Lenn
[10.Nov.03 02:40]
Ok, the author is an interesting figure, the book is good (though sometimes twitchy in cacophonies)... Indeed, long phrases, critical terminology, whatever... What sort of POETRY is this?

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= sentences	Anca Veronica Anghel [09.Nov.03 17:43]
Please try to write shorter sentences. The phrases that you wrote are much too long sometimes. I know that in Romanian language we can use long phrases, but in English it is a little bit different (especially when you do translation). Thank you.

= ?	Axel Lenn [10.Nov.03 02:40]
Ok, the author is an interesting figure, the book is good (though sometimes twitchy in cacophonies)... Indeed, long phrases, critical terminology, whatever... What sort of POETRY is this?