= Way of yours | Axel Lenn [11.Nov.03 22:02] |
disappearAnce, you meen | |
+ Michel | Anca Veronica Anghel [12.Nov.03 01:48] |
Welcome , welcome and I'm eager to read your English poems, although I know that you "feel" better in Romanian. | |
= tiny | Mihail Velcescu [29.Nov.03 13:30] |
A bit on the outskirts of reason... reminding of the dada You are shocking in your writing, quite brutal sometimes, and I feel some sense of anxiety in your poem. You tend to minimalise your self-within-the-poem... an observer, tiny but accurate, pointing at the faults of the human... | |
= nice to meet you, too | Elena Malec [21.Apr.04 16:39] |
Twinkle, twinkle, Little Star... Next time the firmament... How about a little heart, for a change? | |
= Here I am | Daniel Dinescu [25.Apr.04 19:32] |
HEy! Now in English too! :) Let me tell you something, I like the image created by the poem, but I don't like its shape, is like thoughts on a piece of paper...that's my opinion. And I also don't like the use of too manny colours: yellow, white, pink... Ah, I also think that a rainy atmosphere is already British. Talk to you soon! :) Dani | |
= splendid | Ionela-Jeni Grigore [26.Apr.04 18:07] |
wonderful poem. you made me happy today. thank you! see you for real comments. | |
= beautiful | Sigartau Alex [26.Sep.04 21:11] |
"I'll be the pale pink in your marble carnival of dreams"... I'm speechless. Extraordinarily beautiful! | |
= God, flesh poems..... | Diana Pacuraru [04.Feb.05 00:10] |
"with all my flesh poems" --> lost balance. Literally. Great. | |