| = please review | Anca Veronica Anghel [30.Nov.03 17:06] |
| There are some errors. For example "shoud", "mouving" etc. I am sure this text was not checked for misspelling. Also at the very beginning the pronoun has to be with capital letter i.e "I" instead of "i". | |
| - I don't think so. | Iuliana Ungureanu [11.Dec.03 03:57] |
| You have one text here, which is in the workshop. I don't know who wrote what you just published or to whom but based on the one poem you have here I doubt it was adressed to you. Second of all, if it was a comment by one of our members it would be acceptable but otherwise I see no point in having it on this site. It seems you are a bit shallow to have posted that here withouth showing us more of your work. | |
| = just think about it | Tania Cosman [24.Jan.04 04:28] |
| I'm not trying to be mean, but I really do not like your text. I don't think it should have been posted on this site. If you are good, then let others say it. The society you live in appreciates your work. If you haven't learned this already, you shouldn't be so conceited...it's not going to get you far in life. | |