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 =  Solitude Sunday
Maria Katherine Kondax
[14.Oct.10 08:57]
You clearly have a lot of feelings and notions going on about Sunday. Sunday sounds like a good day for solitude to sort all of these good thoughts out. You also took some introspective thoughts of vicarious life with fish and cats. This poem speaks for solitude indeed.

 =  I really liked it! :)
Anca Roshu
[14.Oct.10 20:14]
all of it!
the sunday solitude - excellent described!
I loved this part:

'on Sundays I paint my face
in the colours of the war
what war? stars war? of of
of course'

the star wars part (are you fan??? :)) and that of of of course were simply delicious! :)

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