| = to be corrected | Anca Anghel Novac [28.Apr.04 20:47] |
| "around rinkles and eyes"- pay attention to "rinkles" "around whispers and grims"- pay attention to "grims" "filtred through the cigarette smoke"- ....."filtred" "surching for me"- ....."surching" "at which I mesure my bloodpressure"-"mesure","bloodpressure" ( there is not such a noun "bloodpressure" but there are two nouns used together as "blood pressure" "upon which streches"-....."streches" "with unloaded bateries"- ...."bateries" "condamning to black"- ...."condamning" So please pay attention to this errors and make the corrections. Hope there is no one left by me. Itis always good for you to check also. Thank you. | |
| = anca | Irina Iacovescu [29.Apr.04 18:49] |
| thanks for your patience! this text was full of errors and I can't tell if i made all the corrections, as you suggested. I hope it is a little better now and if there are still mistakes, I will correct them also! Once again, thank you! | |