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= I have dared, cautiously, to touch those borders.
Cristian Rusneac
[07.Aug.04 23:18]
There are some great bits of text here and metaphors that make a lot of sense to me. ("Raining my skin with little suns until it goes dark...","My heart covers itself with green leaves when it feels sad") and I think the second stanza is of a particularly tender quality. The last one, however, sounds less so because of some risky (and maybe cliche: I'm talking about the explorer parallel) formulas of expression, a greater risk, I hope, than the one you are talking about... The idea of a wild area on an undiscovered continent is new to me and sounds very seductive, so Good Luck and keep those palms turned up to receive other people's drips and drops of their mind.

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= I have dared, cautiously, to touch those borders.	Cristian Rusneac [07.Aug.04 23:18]
There are some great bits of text here and metaphors that make a lot of sense to me. ("Raining my skin with little suns until it goes dark...","My heart covers itself with green leaves when it feels sad") and I think the second stanza is of a particularly tender quality. The last one, however, sounds less so because of some risky (and maybe cliche: I'm talking about the explorer parallel) formulas of expression, a greater risk, I hope, than the one you are talking about... The idea of a wild area on an undiscovered continent is new to me and sounds very seductive, so Good Luck and keep those palms turned up to receive other people's drips and drops of their mind.