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 =  Oleg
Corina Dragomir
[25.Sep.04 22:34]
try to correct these typos: hend - hand
leastens - listens
as far as the use of the verb "heart" is concerned I'm pretty sure you meant "harm" or "hurt". God plays with us leaving the part of the travellers in time suspended to an erected finger entering the whirpool of frosted silence
stumbling in the sterile murmur of maternal lamentation.
Look windward!
:)

 =  This...
Daniel Dinescu
[26.Sep.04 00:03]
"yes, this world is a perfect imitation
of my left hand’s big finger
do not hurt it
when God listens cold play in hot weekends
this world is a fu..ing boring part of me"

This should be the text. Thank you for your understanding.
DD

 =  shame of me II
Neaga Oleg
[03.Oct.04 22:08]
no,
thank you daniel and cory
for your acorded and may be wasted time
sorry for my bad habbits and my bad english
have a nice day...

 =  Yeah
Diana Pacuraru
[03.Feb.05 00:18]
"this world is a fu..ing boring part of me" ---> interesting. You seem pretty lonesome. Tell me more. What do you believe in?

 =  my opinion
Marius Surleac
[11.Aug.08 11:58]
Funny and revolting.
The "big finger" - you played guitar when writing the poem? with the left hand - a boring day?




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