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+ a paranoid black cat
Andreea DrĂ£guleasa
[18.Sep.04 23:36]
Your poem is wearing a charming dress I couldn't resist.
Perhaps it is pointless to specify which images I liked best, as the entire poem caught my fancy.
Lost in your words and extremely pleased by this wandering.

A.

 =  A
Michel Martin
[20.Sep.04 18:00]
Surprised to find you here, Andreea, don't ask me why. :)It's a poem that I wouldn't have wanted to write, a brutal return to some old ghosts.
Thank you for knocking.

 =  pain is not a lollypop
Motoc Lavinia
[21.Sep.04 12:51]
I think that 'easy easy' is absolutely charming, it sounds like fallen bridges in the waters of childhood.
And, of course, the end, well, the end shall be heard...

 =  Just a flight
Daniel Dinescu
[22.Sep.04 16:08]
For me, this poem sounds. Yes, only sounds in my years and tries to fly. Maybe I had a smile on my face when I saw 'Barcelona' again... :)
Interesting, but in the Romanian way of marking things with this word.
DD

 =  image
Sigartau Alex
[26.Sep.04 21:10]
indeed, i red your poem a few times and found it good. it has something utterly painful and something else totally gentle.

 =  > Alex again
Michel Martin
[27.Sep.04 18:04]
I'm a bit amazed because you managed to notice twice the gentle-violent way of expressing myself. It's what I like to call roses&beasts.

 =  conscription
Sigartau Alex
[11.Feb.05 00:55]
Michel, I have read your poems through and through and I have decided that I want some of them published on www.egophobia.ro . I am an editor there. If you are interested, please don't hesitate giving me a reply or maybe even mailing me as you can find my email adress on egophobia. Thank you and best of luck!




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