| = not too bad | Motoc Lavinia [30.Nov.04 18:29] |
| I like the short verses and the idea of grouping them two by two, I like the ending expressed by a question. The verses can be looked at as to flashes, but they also have musicality, which is good. | |
| = Bloody | Diana Pacuraru [30.Dec.04 01:50] |
| This one is good indeed. I like the image, the perfume of the entire atmosphere. Way to go | |
| = axe | Daria Patrunjel [28.Jan.05 02:44] |
| i couldn't help it not to make another comment, now that i've discovered some of your poems. i just wanted to mention pink floyd's 'careful with that axe eugene' ,perhaps it has nothing to do with it, just one of my obsessions:) | |