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The Big Eye\'s Planet
prose [ Science-Fiction ]
(inspired by Stargate SG1)

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by [justme64 ]

2009-03-10  |     | 

The seventh symbol was activated and the wormhole was functional, so SG-1 can pass through…
… On the new planet all is motionless. The team made some steps on the arid ground. But look! Millions of eyes, in millions of colors, arise from nowhere, flowing in the air. Later the team realized that every color represents a military or civilian grade.
One oh those eyes, the big of them, red colored, started to speak with a thunder voice; "Who are you, strangers? And what do you want from us?" In that moment the team was catch by an invisible trawl.
Vainly the star passengers try to explain their good intentions. Nobody listened them. They were took from there and bring to the king of that planet. That king, named Oky'oi, is the biggest eye from the planet. He was blue, the sign of a superior intelligence, and he contained the knowledge of his all-ancient civilization. He seems to be smart but cruel with the others, but loving and devoted to his son, the green Oky'shor.
Oky'oi discussed with the strangers and he decided that they are not to be able to survive cause they aren't so advanced as he was.
Only Dr Jackson can save the team from a cruel death; Daniel realized that Oky'shor, the child, could be an ally, which can help the team to survive. So he decides to make Oky'shor his friend and to gain his trust. But how can he do that? Simply, Daniel, with his blue and tender eyes, looks at Oky'shor, telling him one of our stories, something like "Snow White" or "Cinderella"… Oky'shor was enchanted by the story and asked to his father to forgive the humans and to let them their life. Oky'oi can't refuse the request of his beloved son and give them back the freedom.
Oky'oi can change his blue iris into a big screen on which he showed to the SG-1 team moments of the history of his planet, and of the Earth's history too… Moment of the past and moments from the future… And then he had teach the passengers how could they always take the best decisions only by searching their minds and using the power of the third hidden eye which it seems to exist in everyone of us.

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