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Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu, / Rareș Gireadă
I don't really know. I wrote this text more as a piece of mind (raw). I don't write much in English,
on "*",
Poetry by Rareș Gireadă
To be continued, maybe? / Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu
Rares, I am looking at a beginning of a maybe great poem.
Maybe if you'd kindly continue?
rcm
on "*",
Poetry by Rareș Gireadă
The fine line between desperation and hope
/ Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu
Finding the nigh impossible to grasp balance between structure and the waves of a poet's heart, is m
on "Echos of Lost Paradise",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
thank you / Ionel Movila
thank you so much i appreciate that
on "Echos of Lost Paradise",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
nothing to forgive Ionel / Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu
Ionel, there's absolutely nothing to forgive.
You are writing from the heart, you have obvious tale
on "Echos of Lost Paradise",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
thank you / Ionel Movila
yes that is true, i did try to concentrate on the rhyme, but on the feelings to, it might not be the
on "Echos of Lost Paradise",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
< comments > / Ionel Movila
ok thank you, and sorry, i am not to good at English.
on "A lonely life",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
non rhyme / Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu
Ionel, bad doesn't rhyme with bed, and even less does the forced final in your one before last, stan
on "A lonely life",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
Beyond the rhyme / Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu
Ionel,
your text speaks from the heart. I would recommend nevertheless, exploring more the depths w
on "Echos of Lost Paradise",
Poetry by Ionel Movila
Deserves more attention / Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu
A deeply felt text, which would deserve IMO a bit more consideration?
rcm
on "Becoming One",
Poetry by Radu Ioan Tudosan
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
It needs a bit more...poetry to be poetry :)
It's too blunt and lacks vision as it presents itself
on "My life is gone",
Poetry by Santorelli Iovino
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
This text could improve with a bit more substance. It's a neat poem but too simplistic.
Regards,
on "The White Ship",
Poetry by Lesenciuc Teodor
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
I guess it needs a bit more substance than this.
Bold though! :)
on "funny little bird",
Poetry by Radu Ioan Tudosan
It is very brief at this point. / Edward Wells II
The tone that seems to be developing is intriguing. I hope You will add to this piece. As the charac
on "Insurance for a lifetime",
Prose by mia isabela deleanu
Definitely agree with Alina on the "poetry" tag. / Edward Wells II
And verify your spell check. There are some irregular pluralizations and other possible concerns. (c
on "plastic bottles",
Prose by Craig Burke
All the best my thought are just fine / Grebenisan Mihai Marian
Thnx you right...I have many thoughts but I dont write them all:)
on "Mother",
Poetry by Grebenisan Mihai Marian
Andrei. / Andrei Rafael
It won't change unless you tell her. HER, not to YOURSELF.
So I'd guess...
on "Talking to myself...",
Poetry by Ciprian Toader
Dear Nicolae / Corina Gina Papouis
I would encourage you to explore in more depth the message you are trying to release to the reader.
on "Loving",
Poetry by Nicolae VASILE
black is not / El Grande Gringo
darkness does not exist. black is a figment of our limitations.
on "Triangle of life",
Poetry by Carmen Codreanu
love sparks / El Grande Gringo
there is no more empathy left. it has all been up for sale and those late shoppers scooped it all. w
on "13 going on 30",
Poetry by nica ioana
suggestion / Corina Gina Papouis
Try and reshape some of the verses, maybe get rid of some of the unnecessary words and it will hopef
on "Love",
Poetry by Luca Filipescu
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
Please check grammar and spelling!
Thanks!
on "Summer, Sunday, sunny day",
Poetry by Vasile Mican
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
I understand this is a translation? ok. I guess you need to choose either rhyme or no rhyme at all.
on "The cyclic man",
Poetry by Nicolae VASILE
? typo / Corina Gina Papouis
*damaged brains?
on "13 going on 30",
Poetry by nica ioana
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
Please see the message I left for you under your previous text. It applies here as well.
Regards!
on "A complicated love poem",
Poetry by Florentina Anghel
Hi Florentina / Corina Gina Papouis
Welcome to Agonia! :)
I believe your text is more of a personal nature, appears more like a blog st
on "An old story",
Poetry by Florentina Anghel
< comments > / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Thank you all very much and please accept my apologies for not following the recomandation. I don't
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Thank you Cristian. I haven't been so into poetry lately but I decided to visit my "poetic home" and
on "For the sake or argument",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
I strongly recommend you to / Veronica Vãleanu
Welcome, Carmen!
I strongly agree with the idea that a little bit of science makes the perfect in
on "Triangle of life",
Poetry by Carmen Codreanu
milk and honey / Dely Cristian Marian
It has that thing that arouses the curiosity. (I've been chasing after your heroes in my mind, as th
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
tongue / Dely Cristian Marian
Quite interesting; this poetry is really into arguing... for the sake of a mighty pair perhaps.
It
on "For the sake or argument",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
The rhythm of this poem is broken thus the poem doesn't flow.
It could be easily corrected.
Rega
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Ok, thank you. I will try to reshape it.
on "Time and Ego",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
This poem does not sustain any rhythm, rhyme or white verse. It does not do any favours to the reade
on "Time and Ego",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
grammar... / Romulus Campan
Please reconsider for grammar problems...
rc
on "Questions about Life",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
grammar... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Please reconsider for grammar and syntax inconsistencies.
rcm
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
not so simple... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Hi Marilena,
I couldn't help noticing the lengthy gap between your last text and this one...
You
on "Simply thoughts",
Poetry by Niculae Marilena
< comments > / Veronica Vãleanu
I tried myself, and it works. Perhaps you should take more patience with your computer.
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
Thank you / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
so much, but this is exactly the reason I am writting, this option is not working.
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
< comments > / Veronica Vãleanu
yes, of course.
right below the text there is a case: [this is your text. you can edit this text]
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
help / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
hello:) i have a problem editing this text, may I please get some help?
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
< comments > / Veronica Vãleanu
getting the message across
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
< comments > / Veronica Vãleanu
you aren't disturbing anyone
it's not outrageous to be in the situation of having extraordinary t
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
sorry to disturbe you / Anni- Lorei Mainka
Yes, you decide here, and it is right so.
But in more than one way it is still a difficult situatio
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
look... / Anni- Lorei Mainka
My final verses are for me so short and explain exactly what I want.
The change at the beginning -
on "It ' s still summer 1",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
thks / Anni- Lorei Mainka
You're so nice to tell me what you ve seen:
I've written "the autumn's doors", because it's a sp
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
< comments > / Veronica Vãleanu
[when playing, we won't be able to hear the soldiers' steps] instead of [playing, we'll can't hear t
on "It ' s still summer 1",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
< comments > / Veronica Vãleanu
[autumn's door] instead of [the autumn's doors]
[will be] instead of [we'll be]
[mind]
[bones]
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
thank s that there is an sign from an editor / Anni- Lorei Mainka
Would you be so kind and tell me directly : what you mean with "revised"?
These poems are a part fr
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
Edit Issue / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
Hei:) with all due respect down this page it clearly says "This is your text: You can edit this text
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
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